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I need to split this post into a few parts since LJ deemed my post too long and refused my update -.-". Gosh, the typo and grammatical errors this game has made me either cringe or burst laughing. Seriously dude? Can't pay one proofreader for your script? >_>;

Earlier chapters (1st story 1-15)


Chapter 16
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Part 4: Desktop | Mobile | Slideshow NOTE: To get 50 points, select no 2 (Are you drunk?)
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Chapter 17
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Chapter 18
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Chapter 19
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Chapter 20
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Chapter 21
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Chapter 22
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Chapter 23
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Chapter 24
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Chapter 25
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Part 3: Desktop | Mobile | Slideshow NOTE: I select no 3 (Ask about the marriage) and only get 30 points
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Chapter 26
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Chapter 27
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Another End (Johannes' ending)
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Happy End (Mike's ending)
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Spoiler alert: Honestly speaking I think the main chara is two timing, good for nothing girl. How can she do that while she's still dating such a loyal, understanding and patient boyfriend??

I've decided I have enough of this game, I wouldn't be playing the 2nd story. Second story picked up from happy ending so I don't have any idea of anyone with Another End will be able to continue or not. I can get both end for 2nd ending too since the love meter needed is only around 1375 and my starting love meter with my avatar is already 550. Nevertheless, the lousy plot, unstable characterization and frustratingly linear storyline discourage me from continue. Please find your 2nd story source elsewhere. I believe yuuwatari will continue post it in her youtube channel.

Comments

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(Anonymous)
May. 16th, 2013 08:02 am (UTC)
next chapter
hey marine.. can you upload next chapter 24 till 27..

This is a good story and I really wanna know how it ends..
marine_maiden
May. 17th, 2013 02:24 pm (UTC)
Re: next chapter
Honestly I don't think the story is that good but since I've been doing this halfway, I just want to finish uploading it till the end. I'm getting both ends so sit tight. I should be able to upload them tomorrow.
(Anonymous)
May. 20th, 2013 02:25 am (UTC)
Re: next chapter
Woww.. thank you Marine... XOXO

I Just wanna know how it ends.. :D

But im appreciate your fast response.. ^^,
marine_maiden
May. 20th, 2013 12:28 pm (UTC)
Re: next chapter
You're welcome~
(Anonymous)
May. 19th, 2013 02:00 am (UTC)
Please
Hi Marine,

Could you please re-organise the slides for mike's end and make them into an album? I really cant read. Thanks ^^

Anonymous XD
marine_maiden
May. 19th, 2013 03:22 am (UTC)
Re: Please
LOL The only reason I haven't posted the link here is because I have yet sorted them. Now I had sorted them, you should be able to read just fine :)
(Anonymous)
May. 20th, 2013 06:05 am (UTC)
Re: Please
Hy. Marine..

That Mike's Ending is really cant be read..

it just appear as error page...

Can you fix it for us..? I'll be very happy if you can.. ^^,

Thanks before
marine_maiden
May. 20th, 2013 12:29 pm (UTC)
Re: Please
I sincerely apologize, it was a wrong name folder... I fixed it now. You should be able to see it.
(Anonymous)
May. 19th, 2013 04:43 am (UTC)
I am not able to read both endings from my iphone. Something wrong?0.0
marine_maiden
May. 20th, 2013 12:29 pm (UTC)
No no, it's my fault. It was a wrong folder name... I fixed it now. You should be able to see it.
(Anonymous)
May. 20th, 2013 12:10 am (UTC)
can't see
Hi marine, i slso can't see both the happy end and anither end. I'll appreciate uf you would help to fix it. Thanks ;)
marine_maiden
May. 20th, 2013 12:30 pm (UTC)
Re: can't see
Sorry, I fixed it. You should be able to see now.
(Anonymous)
May. 20th, 2013 03:14 pm (UTC)
Thanks
Thanks for uploading all the chapters and giving fast replies all the time! I really appreciated it: )
marine_maiden
May. 21st, 2013 10:47 am (UTC)
Re: Thanks
Np! Glad you actually find the upload useful :)
(Anonymous)
Jun. 4th, 2013 03:59 pm (UTC)
many thanks
Thank you Marine for uploading the story!! I regret I didn't find your site earlier... Like you I have enough of the game. m.
marine_maiden
Jun. 5th, 2013 04:15 am (UTC)
Re: many thanks
You're welcome. That game have one of the worst characterization and plot ever lol
(Anonymous)
Jul. 1st, 2013 04:44 pm (UTC)
...
OMG ! Thanks to you I wouldn't spend another day just to wait for the tickets . It's an intriguing story from the start but the story gets kinda abrading. I only got up to Chapter 27 (it really took me some time just wanting to know how the story runs)and it came to the part of choosing the ending that I stopped. It actually has a potential given to the right writer though i don't know what they did.

Anyways, thank you so much <3
marine_maiden
Jul. 2nd, 2013 01:52 am (UTC)
Re: ...
Yeah it's really a pity. There's potential in the story but they kill it with inconsistencies … (reminda me so much of k-drama development lately )
(Anonymous)
Jul. 2nd, 2013 04:00 am (UTC)
Thank you!
Hi Marine! I thank you for posting the whole story. I have been reading it on my phone and to speak honestly, I am the most impatient person ever (in my POV). That being said, I happily, luckily stumbled upon your live journal and just thank you so much! This is the second otome I have ever read so I never knew of sites like yours, and I sincerely thank you for posting every single chapter on here. I am almost sure that it has been very er..what's the word .. aggravating? annoying? something in the middle of those two to be posting it all.
I agree with you in saying how you have had enough with this game because I have too. (Just speaking opinion from here on forth on the game so you don't have to read it all but I would like to voice myself anyways XD)
I thought that the sister shouldn't of accepted him back with open arms, I mean it does make me happy with that ending but .. after all did he not betray her and hurt her by cutting off all ties in one instant? Quite frankly, I would of liked to see him apologize to his sister. As for the Johannes ending; I would of thought that Mike would've cut off all ties after hearing everything and even going so far as killing his sister. I hoped that in that ending Marine and Johannes would be happy with Mike at least feeling guilty and own up to his mistakes and hurting her feelings by the very least, apologizing.
marine_maiden
Jul. 4th, 2013 05:03 am (UTC)
Re: Thank you!
Lol actually uploading the shots weren't that annoying even though it's tiring. If only the story is good then I really wouldn't mind continue. But they did a lousy work on the plot, being too inconsistent on characterization (I'd bitch slap the brother and make sure I have proper revenge after the way he treated me with, definitely not the slightest inclination to accept him back)
(Anonymous)
Jul. 3rd, 2013 07:52 pm (UTC)
Forbidden love Mike's 4th story!
I love so much this game. Actually I am too addicted that I can't stand one day without reading a chapter. (that's bad I know!) Anyway. there are like 4 days -I think so- that I have finished story 3 and I am waiting in July (this month) for the 4th story to come out. Do you have ANY idea when it will be?
marine_maiden
Jul. 4th, 2013 04:57 am (UTC)
Re: Forbidden love Mike's 4th story!
Wow they drag it THAT long? Lol no I have no idea but great that you enjoy it…
(Anonymous)
Jul. 8th, 2013 03:51 pm (UTC)
thanks
First of all thanks a lot for updating both the versions of the 1st story. I was way to curious to knw both the end but didn't hve the needed points for that.

Can u plz update all the ends of the 2nd and 3rd story as well because I have just finished the stories through the happy route so have no idea what happened in the other end.
marine_maiden
Jul. 9th, 2013 02:03 am (UTC)
Re: thanks
Ah sorry, I've uninstalled the game. It doesn't hold my interest to continue further. Like I said in my comments, try to look for that YouTube user instead, hopefully she's still posting the stories …
(Anonymous)
Jul. 18th, 2013 01:59 am (UTC)
hey
I liked johanssan ending ......... btw thank you so much for the uploading I really appreciate it
marine_maiden
Aug. 8th, 2013 03:14 pm (UTC)
Re: hey
Np. Yw.
(Anonymous)
Jul. 25th, 2013 12:33 pm (UTC)
Umm where is story two?? Or where can i find it please im a tad addicted to this love story thing hahahaha
marine_maiden
Jul. 25th, 2013 02:45 pm (UTC)
I don't have it lol I don't play it anymore.
nancy_hiwatari
Aug. 1st, 2013 10:54 pm (UTC)
Johannes Story
Hi marine! i think the same than you about the game, but today the game's company release the exclusive johannes route <3 i think i'll play again only for him. Thanks for the guide!
marine_maiden
Aug. 8th, 2013 03:13 pm (UTC)
Re: Johannes Story
I saw too and I tried, they're trying to turn Johannes into her younger brother now? OMG… it's like a totally different story unconnected to Mike this time -.-"
(Anonymous)
Aug. 5th, 2013 01:20 pm (UTC)
mobile
i got annoyed playin this on my phone and so when i came across this page i was happy.. plot gets pretty shitty though, they shouldve put some cat and mouse stuff into i.e mike chases her or something :-( not many people would take emotional hits like the female lead and stick around. oh and i hated the ending, 3 hours of reading only to get 2 shit endings haha but not ur fault.. thanks heaps for posting all of this, sorry for my blabbering.
marine_maiden
Aug. 8th, 2013 03:12 pm (UTC)
Re: mobile
Hahahaha~ np. At least you sacrificed less time to get disappointed lol unlike me who's been playing for days!
(Anonymous)
Oct. 25th, 2013 04:56 pm (UTC)
I love reading all the app story but hate to wait. When I seen u had it I was so happy. I can do the YouTube reading. I like to take my time to read. And can u please keep going. And do the other storys.

Thank you again for ur post
marine_maiden
Oct. 26th, 2013 03:01 pm (UTC)
Thanks for reading but no, I'm not going to do the other stories they have.
(Anonymous)
Jun. 17th, 2014 12:13 pm (UTC)
My opinion but thanks anyways
Thank you for posting this, i couldnt wait to finish the
Story because they only gue us 5 scenario tickets which
Is so lame but otherwise i disagree with what u said about
The main character, in the story, Johannes practically tried to
Rape her and i dont think shes still daring johannes while being married
To mike jo should have obviously knew!! The only thing i didnt like about there relarionship was the fact that yet she kept gping back to jo after everything which was a horrible choice, i wouldve broken up with him 10 chapters back, an the other thing i didnt like about the character was that she never spoke up about anything when they were REALLY important she would just always be speachless she never said anything about what Amelia did at the piano concert, nor did she even say anything about the whole kidnappig thing with Amelia, she just let it be!! So yeah thats my opinion on the story and thanks for posting this! Now i can continue reading onto the next story! :)
marine_maiden
Jun. 18th, 2014 01:26 am (UTC)
Re: My opinion but thanks anyways
Lot's of typo but I still get what you mean, yeah I agree the main chara is a wimp.
(Anonymous)
Jun. 17th, 2014 12:36 pm (UTC)
Uggh
All Jo ever wanted was sex
marine_maiden
Jun. 18th, 2014 01:27 am (UTC)
Re: Uggh
*Gyahahaha* that and being a possessive bastard.
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